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Friday, 14 October 2016

Emily's Improving comments



In Room 11 we have been learning about  Improving comments

4 comments:

  1. Hi Emily. I like how you have improved your comment. Can you explain what you did? Can you tell us why you need to look at blog comments from time to time and how you can encourage others to comment on your blog?
    Ms Lim

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  2. Hi Emily, I like your improved comment too, especially where you make a link with the blogger by saying that you like doing speeches. Could you have also said what in particular you found interesting?

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